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Alphonso

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PostSubject: Panto Panto no Mi   Panto Panto no Mi EmptyThu Aug 08, 2013 3:42 am

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Devil Fruit Name: Panto Panto no Mi
Translation: Mime Mime Fruit
Class: Paramecia
What the fruit does: Turns the user into a Mime Human, granting them the ability to create invisible forces through the catalyst of miming. Essentially anything the user can imagine they can create. CANNOT create sea stone items or water.

Levels:
Dormant: Allows the creation of basic invisible forces by miming them. At the dormant level the user is able to create simple forces, such as an invisible wall that’s capable of stopping basic attacks, rope, or perhaps a staircase. Anything created by the fruit at this stage can be broken or weakened. Created forces such as rope or the like only have the durability of the real items. i.e. a rope-like force can be broken more easily than a wall.

Awakened: Anything created by the user can now withstand larger and stronger blows without breaking.
The user is also able to create more complex forces such as ranged weaponry.

Adept: Anything created by the user now has durability that is directly linked to the user’s own resilience.
The user is now able to create forces regardless of complexity & size, such as explosives, ship or even a building.

Weaknesses: Usual Devil Fruit weaknesses of sea stone & water.

Taken By: Murdoc Given that approval is granted.


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PostSubject: Re: Panto Panto no Mi   Panto Panto no Mi EmptyThu Aug 08, 2013 12:27 pm

This looks good. A few points

Most Devil's Fruits have two-syllable names. My suggestion is shorten the name to something like "panto panto" or "maimu maimu"

Second. I'm not sure if its very for the diet to be able to make explosives. I understand the weaponry, but being able to make explosives? Don't think so, sorry

Third-I actually really like this fruit!! It's really awesome. And the name sounds like pantomime xD
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PostSubject: Re: Panto Panto no Mi   Panto Panto no Mi EmptyThu Aug 08, 2013 12:39 pm

Thank you for looking at the fruit

Honestly those two points you brought up aren't really issues. The name isn't really something that should matter.

Also the explosives I don't see why not since its just the ability to make a bomb but doesn't go into the area of the bomu bomu where it creates explosions from their body and doesn't make them immune. It just lets them create a bomb and thats it really, bomb can still be disarmed and so on. Its like the Buki Buki it can turn the user into weapons & bombs this one just lets the user make imaginary ones thats all.

Sorry if it seems I'm arguing its just something I feel shouldn't be denied as a part of the fruit since it still follows the principle of the miming. But I can add in some draw backs to stop it from being too OPed such as a radius.
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PostSubject: Re: Panto Panto no Mi   Panto Panto no Mi EmptyThu Aug 08, 2013 1:06 pm

The names don't matter that much, it just sounds better and it follows the show

And adding a radius would make it a little better, though I'd prefer to get rid of it all together. Just add a radius and I'll approve it
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PostSubject: Re: Panto Panto no Mi   Panto Panto no Mi EmptyThu Aug 08, 2013 1:20 pm

Changed it although honestly I don't think the bombs are that big an issue if logias are able to change into their elements since it wouldn't effect them anyway only everyone is within the radius.

Main reason I don't think it matters is because logias are given the chance to be at their full limit of their power such as the pika pika moving at light speed since that is a by product of elemental transformation yet I'm not allowed to imagine a bomb because its too powerful.

Which one is more powerful the ability to move at light speed or make a bomb with a radius? Personally I believe it is the ability to move at light speed hence it seems logias are allowed to bypass certain rules into the over powered whilst custom are not instead of both fruits being at the same power range of their abilities.
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PostSubject: Re: Panto Panto no Mi   Panto Panto no Mi EmptyThu Aug 08, 2013 2:20 pm

I didn't think about that. Of course, most bombs have a radius anyways. Okay, I approve it with the ability to make bombs

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PostSubject: Re: Panto Panto no Mi   Panto Panto no Mi EmptyThu Aug 08, 2013 2:50 pm

Thank you very much butterfly sorry for the debate

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PostSubject: Re: Panto Panto no Mi   Panto Panto no Mi EmptyThu Aug 08, 2013 3:54 pm

It fine, sorry for saying no at first :/

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